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Great artist that I've known:
[My brother]
Fadlullah Firman's
[My childhood friend]
Aneesah's
--[My other blog]
Farah's
I like how in the first poster you used a key for the viewers to follow. In the second poster i like how you cropped your letters off the page it is well balanced throughout.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy your "earthy" colors. I really like the "u" poster where all of the letters almost intertwine together. It feels really unified and balanced. I like the hierarchy also.
ReplyDeleteThe feminine colors in your first poster work well with the curvilinear nature of your font. I enjoyed the range of scale in all three of your posters. It gave a sense of hierarchy and my eye flowed easily through the composition.
ReplyDeleteThe first two have the best compositions. The third feels like it has empty space in the middle. I like the overall composition of the first poster the best. I also enjoy the colors. The only thing I would suggest is to experiment a little with texture or value to create a little more visual interest in the poster.
ReplyDeleteI like the last two compositions the best. You have a great color palette. There is a clear hierarchy present, and my eye can easily transition from each bit of information. They look very professional.
ReplyDeleteThe three posters work great as a series! I love your color combinations, and quite frankly I wish you didn't have to separate them because there's some synergy there. I like how you played with the scale and placement of the characters. I want to like the third composition best because I love the large "Q" and the circular dotted lines, but I agree with Caitlin that it feels a little empty in the center area. Tough choice. I honestly think you should see if Andrea lets you combine them for the final poster, because they work so well as a group. Excellent work!
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